Me?

[Sara †]

Me...............I am who I am

Thought of before time

My life was planned out, In His will, not mine

I have traveled a road "I" thought was best

Only to be guided back into His rest

one keeps on tempting, poking and proding

he knows my weak points and knows I get down troden

Sometimes the pain, so Intense I gasp!

Only to look up and find His hand to grasp

That peace I long for, I do not know it yet

And everyday I "miss the mark", again I regret

A way out of this mass complexity, I desire an end

Yet that still small voice keeps saying "my plan does not bend"

I know there is a peace in the one who created it

But is there a chance my pain is to be infinite?

I do not have answers just the desire to cease to exist

Only if He would take us ALL as he sees fit

Me................I am who I am

Thought of before time

My life is planned out in His will, not mine

[Angel]

Sara+

Thank you for your poem. Sounds like you were inspired by something that's going on in your life right now. It sounds very sad. :-( I hope you are ok but like you said in your poem His hand is right there to pull us out of any trouble and yes He does have a plan for each and everyone of us. Yes, His will be done not ours. It's a good poem and I hope that I will read more. :)

Angel:af

[SaintSean]

1Co 15:10 But by the grace of God I am what I am: and his grace which was bestowed upon me was not in vain; but I laboured more abundantly than they all: yet not I, but the grace of God which was with me.

This was a wonderful Stanza Sara. I really enjoyed it, it echo's my life in attempts and God's plan. I do though, because i love you, will not flatter your ears as most might. I will offer crtical advice that will help you to grow in this ability our Lord hath given you. Such as the western style rhyme scheme. You may be just starting out, but every sentence(if any) dosen't have to rhyme. I feel you limit yourself(and the Holy Spirit if be) by having to end the sentence that should be to the glory of our God, with a word that rhymes :/ But a wonderful poem no doubt, and I am looking forward to more. God bless

[SemperReformanda]

i like it :)

[cheerleadingchic]

Me...............I am who I am

Thought of before time

My life was planned out, In His will, not mine

I have traveled a road "I" thought was best

Only to be guided back into His rest

one keeps on tempting, poking and proding

he knows my weak points and knows I get down troden

Sometimes the pain, so Intense I gasp!

Only to look up and find His hand to grasp

That peace I long for, I do not know it yet

And everyday I "miss the mark", again I regret

A way out of this mass complexity, I desire an end

Yet that still small voice keeps saying "my plan does not bend"

I know there is a peace in the one who created it

But is there a chance my pain is to be infinite?

I do not have answers just the desire to cease to exist

Only if He would take us ALL as he sees fit

Me................I am who I am

Thought of before time

My life is planned out in His will, not mine wow sara that was so beautiful im crying right now